高二英语作文修改及答案

　　I found that we had a big snowfall. I was very excited because 2.___________

　　it was a long time that I had ever seen such a heavy snowfall. 3.___________

　　So I decided to call my friends to go out to play snow together. 4.___________

　　We made up some snowmen and rolled some snowballs 5.___________

　　and we enjoyed the fun of playing fighting games. Just then 6.___________

　　we noticed that the buses and cars move very slowly 7.___________

　　because the heavy snow. So we went to clean the snow so as to 8.___________

　　help the traffic go safely. After the all morning’s hard work, 9.___________

　　we cleaned the snows on the road, and we went home happily. 10.___________

　　【答案与解析】

　　1. 把me改为my。因为“使某人吃惊的是……”的英语表达是to one’s surprise。

　　2. 把big改为heavy。英语中，表示大雪、大雨等中的“大”，习惯上用heavy，不用big。

　　3. 把that改为since。句型“It be + 时间段 + since从句(延续性动词)”表示“很久没有……了”。

　　4. 在play后加with。“玩……”用play with…。但表示玩游戏、打球等却不要用with。

　　5. 去掉made后面的up。表示“做”雪人直接用make；make up是“虚构、编造”之意。

　　6. 此行正确。

　　7. 把move改为moved。根据时态一致原则。此外，也可将that去掉，move…就成为一个作宾补的不定式。

　　8. 在because后加of。因为后面接的是一个名词短语，不是从句。

　　9. 把all改为whole。all要放在冠词前面，在冠词后用whole。

　　10. 把snows改为snow。snow一般作不可数名词；它只有表示“下雪、降雪”时，才作可数名词。

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