families to get together. Have you ever thought of 7.___________
how you can show your parents that you love them 8.___________
Find a chance and do something for them or to have 9.___________
sincere talk with them. If you can do this, your parents 10.___________
will be very happy.
【答案与解析】
1. 将many改为much。修饰不可数名词(time)不能用many。
2. 将dearer改为dearest。与in the world连用，用最高级。
3. 将of改为for。care for sb.= love sb.爱某人。
4. 将deep改deeply为。表示抽象意义“深深地”，用deeply。
5. 将more改为less。由even though和still可知，小孩随着年龄增大，与父母的关系可能变得不及以前亲密。
6. 将you改为they。因为是代替上文的many children。
7. 去掉of。think of后面常接sth.或doing sth.，不接从句。
8. 此行正确。
9. 去掉to。have与前面的find并列，均为祈使句。
10. 在sincere前加上a。have a talk with sb是固定词组。
No.06
Today is Sunday, The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. 1.___________
At about 9:00a.m, I go to the bookstore with my friends, there 2.___________
was a lot of new books, I didn’t know which one to buy, because 3.___________
these books were all useful to me. At last, I chose two. 4.___________
At 10:00, we went to the cinema, the film calling Titanic was 5.___________
very popular. It took us about 3 hours to see. Having seen the 6.___________
film, and everyone was deeply moved. Some friends even 7.___________
burst out tears. From the story, I understand that love is noble 8.___________
and valuable. That’s a really wonderful film, It is very worth 9.___________
seeing again.
What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happy! 10.____________
【答案与解析】
1. does→is。主语所陈述的内容与前一句主语所陈述的内容相同，用 so 连接并倒装。
2. go→went。文章的主导时态是陈述过去，故用一般过去时。
3. was→were。有很多书，故用复数。
4. √。
5. calling→called。表示“被叫做”，作定语修饰 film。
6. see 后加 it。作某事花去某人多少时间。
7. 去掉 and。前面部分为分词作状语，后面部分为主句。
8. out→into。词组 burst into tears 流泪。
9. very→well。常说 be (well)worth doing(很)值得作某事，不用 very。
10. happy→happier。根据语境，该用含蓄比较级。
No.07
I like travel very much. I had been to most 1.___________
of the interested places in Britain already and I just 2.___________
don’t want other cold English summer. So I’ll go 3.___________
abroad for change this year. Where I’d like 4.___________
to is France, Spain, or Italy. Though going abroad 5.___________
has the trouble of changing money abroad. But 6.___________
when I just think of the sun I’d enjoy for, the new 7.___________
places I’d see, the people I’d meet, I get excited. 8.___________
In fact, which I’d really like to do is to practice my 9.___________
French and Spanish. It would do me a lot at work.10.___________
【答案与解析】
1. had改为have。指到目前为止已经去过英国的大部分有趣的地方，用现在完成时。
2. interested改为interesting。指有趣的地方，而不是指人感到有趣，所以要用interesting。
3. other改为another。因为summer是单数，句意是：我不想再在英国度过一个寒冷的夏天。
4. change前加a。for a change是习语，意为“为了改变常规、为了变化一下”。
5. to后加go。where I’d like to go意为“我想去的地方”。
6. of改为with。表示“某事或做某事让人伤脑筋”用trouble with sth or doing sth。
7. 去掉for。I’d enjoy是定语从句，前面省略了代替先行词the sun的that；enjoy是及物动词，直接说enjoy the sun，所以for是多余的。
8. 此行正确。
9. which改为what。因为用which(哪一)句意不通；what=the thing that…意为“(所)…的”。
10. do改为help。因为用do，意思不通；help me a lot意为“对我帮助很大”。
No.08
Yang Liwei was born from an ordinary family in Liaoning 1.____________
Province in 1965. He became the pilot in Chinese Air Force 2.____________
in 1987, spend 1,350 hours in the air. He has spent 5 years 3.____________
training to become a spaceman. He sent into space at 9 a.m on 4.____________
October 15th by China’s Shenzhou V spacecraft, that orbited 5.____________
the earth 14 times. He landed safe at 6:23 a.m the next day, 6.____________
making China the third country successfully sending a person 7.____________
into space before the former Soviet Union and the USA. 8.____________
Yang Liwei comes back to the earth after a 21-hour trip 9.____________
to space. In space Yang recorded to everything he saw and 10.___________
showed China’s national flag to the people watching on TV.
【答案与解析】
1. from→in。“出生于什么家庭”应该是 be born in a …family。
2. the→a。他成为了“一名”中国空军飞行员。
3. spend→spending。现在分词短语作状语。
4. sent 前加 was。他“被”神州五号送上天空。
5. that→which。非限制性定语从句不用 that 引导。
6.safe→safely。修饰动词应该用副词。
7. √。
8. before→after。中国发射载人飞船应该是在美国、苏联之后。
9. comes→came。“回来”这一动作明显发生在过去。
10. 去掉 to。record 是及物动词。
No.09
One day, did not feeling well, Mr. Smith went to the hospital 1.____________
to have him examined. When he was given the test report, 2.____________
he was greatly shocked. “Am I dying ” He immediately 3.____________
was felt very ill. Filled with sadness, he went back home, 4.____________
taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will. “Maybe 5.____________
a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and 6.____________
went to the hospital to have more examination. To his 7.____________
great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t 8.____________
have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful. 9.____________
Mr. Smith went out for his favourite sport happily rather sadly. 10.___________
【答案与解析】
1. 去掉did，not feeling well在句中充当状语。
2. him改成himself，表示“使自己怎么样”时，应该用反身代词。
3. 正确。
4. 去掉was，felt表示“感到”时，为不及物动词，没有被动形式。
5. taking改成took，and连接的是三个动词went、took、wrote，所以三者在形式上保持一致。
6. a-the，上文中已经提到了这位大夫，所以在此应该予以特指。
7. more-another，another“再一次”。
8. but-and，前后两句话为并列关系，不存在转折的意味。
9. in-at，本句话意思是“他根本没有得癌症”。at all“到底，根本”；in all“总共”。
10. rather后加than，rather than为固定短语，连接两个并列成分。
No.10
Last Sunday morning when I got up, to me great surprise,1.___________
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