1. 字迹工整,书写规范。
尽管我们经常说Don’t judge a person by his/her appearance (不要以貌取人),但不得不承认的是书面表达的卷面印象分确实是存在的,尤其今年本市中考将首次实行网上阅卷,因此考生务必要注意卷面的书写,字迹绝不可潦草,也不要在卷面上胡乱涂改。为了保证卷面的整洁,考生可以先打底稿,然后再将作文誊写到答题卡上。
2. 认真审题,突破要点。
拿到英文作文的题目后,考生不必急于落笔,应先认真审题,仔细阅读写作要求。抓住题眼之后再构思如何对文章进行布局,最好列出写作提纲。而信息点是否涵盖全面将决定整个作文的基准分数,因此最好在正式落笔前将信息点用数字圈画出来,避免遗漏。
3. 运用过渡,组句成文。
好比珍珠项链一般,假如没有一根线串联,珍珠根本无法成为项链。同理,好的英语作文绝不应只是纯粹的英语句子的堆砌,而应在写作中密切注意句与句之间、段落与段落之间的衔接过渡, 下面就几种写作中常见的过渡关系词语进行分类总结。
表并列补充关系:besides, also, what’s more (worse),in addition, moreover, furthermore
表顺序关系:first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, to begin (start) with, then, next, first and foremost, last but not least
表转折对比关系:but, however, although, instead, on the contrary, nevertheless
on one hand, on the other hand
表因果关系:so, therefore, as a result, consequently, hence
4. 雕琢语言,丰富句式。
如果阅卷老师看到考生的文章过于简单,通篇都是简单词汇、简单句式,没有一个高级短语、高级句式,必然不会给高分。因此,丰富作文的语言是必不可少的,考生应尽量长短句结合,使用学过的高级词汇短语和句型,确保文章流畅、通畅;使用非谓语结构、定语从句、强调句型是常用的拿分手段。例如:
使用短语简化并列句、从句:
The flat is very small and there is a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen in it. (with)
After the meeting was over, we went home. (With the meeting over)
用复合句紧缩简单句,避免重复松散,使文章简练、层次清晰:
The flat is in a building. It is not far from my home. (which)
I was walking along the road. At that time, an old man appeared in front of me. (when)
使用从句、强调句,增强句子节奏感:
We studied Chinese, maths, English, physics and computer at school.
The main subjects that we studied at school included…
Our teacher saved the little boy. He is very brave.
It was our brave teacher who saved the little boy.
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